What you're doing is great. I'd also love to see you break down more rhyme schemes in songs too. Keep doing what you're doing though.
2 years ago
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i'm giving this alot of thought, fo real. thanks for posing questions. My feedback so far be, I want to see more of what ur gonna put out. i look forward to it, so go w/ ur gut or sumthin, but i LOVE HEARING BEST/WORST LINE THOUGHTS ALWAYS. i dig 1-10 scales & measuring variables. i ask people 'how r u on ur 1-10?' vs 'how u doin?' i like when folks rate/grade what's experienced. that makes me feel something was gained/something moved forward/changed & it wasn't just a bunch of thoughts in the ether, & by giving it notice it solidifies more right? so MARK THE 'ELEMENTS OF ELEGANCE & SAVAGERY' LOUDLY IN SHARPEE aka PERMANENT RECORD MARKER
2 years ago
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Hey Shane! I think you should work on your ability to identify either a few different options for more convoluted bars. People have so many different interpretations of these lyrics, that sometimes when you say something it comes out like you’re saying it as fact, and if somebody disagrees then they go straight to the comments, or click away. It would be good to offer some meaningful alternatives or acknowledge that your interpretation is just your opinion, more often. I really love watching your content though, the production quality is pretty good and your breakdowns ARE very well educated and thought out and have helped me to better understand the lyrics behind many songs.
2 years ago (edited)
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Esciem
Thank you guys for your votes on the last poll, the reason I'm bugging you guys is to find out how to make this content better for you.
Here's where I'm at
I understand how polarizing "analyzing" rap can be. A lot of you love it, a lot of you hate it, so how can we compromise?
What would you guys think of a grading system for
Beats
Flow
Cadence
Lyrics
Message
Followed by the best line of the song, and the worst line of the song?
Any thoughts?
2 years ago | [YT] | 3