Tbh im not the best at constructive criticism but I think the wip’s coming along well :D The line art’s very clean and all Doey’s unique features are there. I will say you could try making the trey he's holding a bit more 3d (if that makes sense??) so instead of having a “␣” shape it could be more similar to a parallelogram or a very thin rectangle. Though to get a better idea, I'd suggest looking at a reference photo of someone holding a trey (like looking up “person holding a tray” or smth). I do think overall improvement just comes with practice, though I do find analysing reference images and other peoples art can be quite helpful. Like seeing how various people shade/render their art, or perhaps the type of line art they utilize. Then you can use that knowledge and apply it to your own art. Tho of course you wanna still make it original/unique to you in someway so your not copying their work word for word. But anywho hope this helps!
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Oberon64
WIP for @HIGuac . Idk how well this is doing so id like to ask Guac how well is it because honestly i think the lineart is decent for what it is but i def need to improve something
enjoy this WIP because i want to post something about it before i forget
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