I HATE the original "I can't breathe" AU. Most of it is unfaithful to the original material, and I wanna rewrite the story one day.
I'm not gonna rewrite the whole thing. I'm just gonna make some scenes make more sense for the character and remove some obvious fear bait (example: him ripping out his chest and laughing maniacally after not being able to breathe for six seconds)
I added the additional chain on his neck to stop Sonic from using his spin to break the chain with his metal destroying quills.
ALSO, I might miss a few days from here on out, so imma start posting these in chunks every 2/3 days.
SillSnill
day 3 - drowning.
I HATE the original "I can't breathe" AU. Most of it is unfaithful to the original material, and I wanna rewrite the story one day.
I'm not gonna rewrite the whole thing. I'm just gonna make some scenes make more sense for the character and remove some obvious fear bait (example: him ripping out his chest and laughing maniacally after not being able to breathe for six seconds)
I added the additional chain on his neck to stop Sonic from using his spin to break the chain with his metal destroying quills.
ALSO, I might miss a few days from here on out, so imma start posting these in chunks every 2/3 days.
HAVE A GOOD ONE! SORRY FOR THE YAP!
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