Not bad at all. You should add a more twisting motion to the lower body during the swing. Right now, it feels like all the power is coming from just his upper body, as if his lower body is frozen in place. Also, when you cut the pillar, I notice that towards the end, it shifts to the left drastically. While this is a good touch, it should actually shift fast like that in the beginning, right after the white line fades away, then shake and move slow like you made it. I'd also like to add that with the camera shake and grease pencil lines, you'll want to add force to the cape coming away from the pillar. From the sword swing. Instead of it steadily blowing in the wind to the left of the screen. All in all, though, it's great. Just a bit of friendly feedback.
5 months ago (edited)
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I'm not sure if you will change this, but at the moment the texture of the pillar shifts when cut in half. Probably not worth the effort to change this, but I noticed it immediately.
5 months ago (edited) | 6
Stylized Station
LOST THE FILE, RECORDING FOR THE DAY CORRUPTED, NOTHING WORKED, STILL MADE PROGRESS BABY GREASE PENCIL LETS GO
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