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I just went to Six Flags Great America on Saturday for Fright Fest. I watched some good movies at the park, including Twister, Speed, Bad Boys, Sam Raimi's Spider-Man, Mission Impossible 2, American Pie 2, Spy Game, Mark Wahlberg's The Italian Job, Tim Burton's Planet Of The Apes, Lara Croft Tomb Raider, Alien Resurrection, Deep Impact and numerous others.
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Happy B'Day to Her!!!! (Even Though I have been a fan of your content for ALMOST 10 Years Since 2016). Next Year, It'll be my 10 Years on YouTube.
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There are a few issues with this post that make it a bit awkward and less personal. Here's what's wrong: Grammatical Error: The phrase "Since she is born September 16, 1965" is grammatically incorrect. "Since" implies a reason, and the wording is clunky. Lack of Personal Sentiment: The post is very dry and factual. A birthday message is an opportunity to express love, appreciation, or share a memory, but this one only states a fact. No Engagement: It doesn't encourage your community to join in the celebration or share their own birthday wishes. Here's how we can fix it to make it more heartfelt, grammatically correct, and engaging: Option 1 (Heartfelt and Engaging): "Happy 60th birthday to my wonderful mom, Ruth! I'm so grateful for you and everything you've done for me. She was born on this day, September 16th, 1965! Please help me wish her the happiest of birthdays! ❤" Why it works: This version adds a personal, emotional element ("wonderful mom," "so grateful"). It corrects the grammar and ends with an explicit call to action, inviting your community to join in the celebration. Option 2 (More Descriptive and Celebratory): "Celebrating a milestone today! Wishing a happy 60th birthday to my amazing mom, Ruth, who was born on September 16th, 1965. Here's to another year of happiness! 🎉" Why it works: This option uses more celebratory language ("Celebrating a milestone," "huge Happy Birthday") and corrects the grammar. It's a bit more concise while still being more personal than the original post. Option 3 (Simple and Sweet): "Happy 60th Birthday to my mom, Ruth! She was born on September 16, 1965. Thinking of all the great times with her today! 🥰" Why it works: This is a short, sweet, and personal option that gets the key facts across but adds a sentimental touch. All of these options improve the post's tone and effectiveness by making it more personal and engaging for your audienc
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Sarah West The Friendly Cure Magical Queen
Happy 60th Birthday to my mom, Ruth! Since she was born on September 16, 1965. Thinking of all the great times with her today! 🥰
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