Most people sending cold emails are asking the wrong questions. They obsess over the perfect subject line while their entire offer is garbage
Here's all you really need to focus on:
1. The Offer
Make sure your offer is clear
Here's an example
I help agencies book way more meetings with our team of cold email, LinkedIn, and sales coaches for only $497/month inside Galadon Gold
Now here's the format so you can do the same:
I help [specific niche] [achieve a specific result] with [fulfillment description] [bonus benefit]
I'll write a few of these so you can do the same:
Cold email as a service:
I help SaaS companies book 10-30 more demos every month using done-for-you cold email campaigns that get direct responses from decision-makers
SEO services:
I help law firms rank #1 on Google and bring in more high-value cases every month from clients actively searching for legal help
Spend as much time as you can crafting this
Because it's THE backbone of everything you do
I'd rather sell something NOBODY wants - because then the emails will get 0 replies we'll know fast and we can pivot
The real death sentence is selling something only a few people want
Because you win JUST enough times to hold you in business but not enough to really get to FatFIRE or whatever financial goals you're trying to achieve
Inside Galadon Gold I can help you crack this offer in under 30 minutes on a live call
I've created well over 10,000 offers that are still live in the market today
2. Deliverability
Making sure that people see your pitch is as important as having a good offer
I'll give a crappy example: let's say I'm a wedding photographer....
And my email is something like
"Hey Diane idk if you're having a wedding soon but if you are would you let me photograph it for $10k?"
Crappy email but if I sent that to every person on earth and GUARANTEED they saw it...
I might end the week with more money than Elon Musk
The easiest way to get your emails seen now is to use Custom SMTP (not Google not Outlook) and to be ruthless on lead verification
If you have both:
A killer offer AND rock-solid deliverability?
There's no way you can lose in 2025
You could spend months guessing tweaking and hoping your emails work... or you could join Galadon Gold today get your offer dialed in within 30 minutes and start seeing real results immediately.
Talk soon Alex
P.S. Remember that post I wrote about SEO? Turns out a Gold member actually is ranked number 1 for 'best web designers in Chicago' now too. Want to learn how he did it? Join now.
Alex Berman
I get a ton of cold email questions every day...
Most people sending cold emails are asking the wrong questions. They obsess over the perfect subject line while their entire offer is garbage
Here's all you really need to focus on:
1. The Offer
Make sure your offer is clear
Here's an example
I help agencies book way more meetings with our team of cold email, LinkedIn, and sales coaches for only $497/month inside Galadon Gold
Now here's the format so you can do the same:
I help [specific niche] [achieve a specific result] with [fulfillment description] [bonus benefit]
I'll write a few of these so you can do the same:
Cold email as a service:
I help SaaS companies book 10-30 more demos every month using done-for-you cold email campaigns that get direct responses from decision-makers
SEO services:
I help law firms rank #1 on Google and bring in more high-value cases every month from clients actively searching for legal help
Spend as much time as you can crafting this
Because it's THE backbone of everything you do
I'd rather sell something NOBODY wants - because then the emails will get 0 replies we'll know fast and we can pivot
The real death sentence is selling something only a few people want
Because you win JUST enough times to hold you in business but not enough to really get to FatFIRE or whatever financial goals you're trying to achieve
Inside Galadon Gold I can help you crack this offer in under 30 minutes on a live call
I've created well over 10,000 offers that are still live in the market today
2. Deliverability
Making sure that people see your pitch is as important as having a good offer
I'll give a crappy example: let's say I'm a wedding photographer....
And my email is something like
"Hey Diane idk if you're having a wedding soon but if you are would you let me photograph it for $10k?"
Crappy email but if I sent that to every person on earth and GUARANTEED they saw it...
I might end the week with more money than Elon Musk
The easiest way to get your emails seen now is to use Custom SMTP (not Google not Outlook) and to be ruthless on lead verification
If you have both:
A killer offer AND rock-solid deliverability?
There's no way you can lose in 2025
You could spend months guessing tweaking and hoping your emails work... or you could join Galadon Gold today get your offer dialed in within 30 minutes and start seeing real results immediately.
Talk soon
Alex
P.S. Remember that post I wrote about SEO? Turns out a Gold member actually is ranked number 1 for 'best web designers in Chicago' now too. Want to learn how he did it? Join now.
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