My first book is almost finished! I say "almost" because I still need to overlook the whole thing for wording and plot holes until it becomes worthy of proper publication. It is a futuristic short story of a young adult influencer stuck in the addictions of social media, AI, and what today's world is becoming and tries to escape it all. Please read just the first few paragraphs if you can and let me know what you think and how I can improve! Also, this is just a short story for now (26 pages) but I do plan to lengthen the plot a good ways eventually.
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My first book is almost finished! I say "almost" because I still need to overlook the whole thing for wording and plot holes until it becomes worthy of proper publication. It is a futuristic short story of a young adult influencer stuck in the addictions of social media, AI, and what today's world is becoming and tries to escape it all. Please read just the first few paragraphs if you can and let me know what you think and how I can improve! Also, this is just a short story for now (26 pages) but I do plan to lengthen the plot a good ways eventually.
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