The moon poured its bluish-silver glow over her, and she lifted her gaze to it. She followed the strands of light that drifted across the night sky, as though spun by unseen hands, like threads of quiet magic. For a moment, it carried her away from the wreckage of her world, away from the ache she bore.
From a distance, he watched her. The faint glimmer of silver lit his eyes, softening his face as he wove the moonlight for her. He saw the way her gaze sparkled at the sight, not knowing it was him she was looking at—him she was unknowingly reaching for.
kiwi
The video is done! I’ll be posting it in a few minutes.
Before watching, I’d highly suggest using your headphones for this one. I tried my best to pick music that fits the scenes. And also, maybe read it when you’re alone.
The last time I wrote something like this was... The Vanished? So I really hope you enjoy this one.
Drop your theories if you have any. I’d love to hear them.
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kiwi
Currently editing a new one-shot 👀
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How's everyone doing? I'm absolutely done.
But yeah, I'm here with a small update. I'm currently experimenting with a new one-shot. I was a little confused about whether to make it a one-shot or a two-shot, but since I still don't know whether you'll like it or not, I'll keep it as a single episode for now.
As I said, it's different. Or at least, I hope it is. You might feel like it's a little incomplete after reading it, which you probably will, because this was actually one of the ideas from a series I want to write someday.
I'll update you all again once the video is done.
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Before a writer, I'll always be a reader.
One of these days, I dove into another story that started off with a genuinely good plot. But... I don't know. I just can't understand how so many people still seem to misunderstand what enemies-to-lovers actually means. What disappointed me wasn't the story itself. It was actually really good. It was the FMC's pov.
In the beginning, it was clearly stated that she disliked the MMC and practically everything about him. But then they met for the first time and suddenly we got two whole paragraphs describing his jaw, his eyes, his features... it's not bad writing. But come on. If the first thing your supposedly hateful FMC notices about the man she's supposed to despise is how pretty his eyes are, is this really enemies-to-lovers anymore?
I want the enemies part to actually exist before we get to the lovers part. Let them genuinely dislike each other. Let them misunderstand each other. Let them clash. Let the attraction sneak up on them instead of arriving five minutes after their first meeting with a suitcase.
Thinking about it, is there anything you hate reading in stories these days? Except the obvious ones, like cheating.
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A new one-shot will be posted in a few hours!
Before you read it, though, this is actually a small part that I edited out from a series I wrote. So, consider it a little preview or something.
I made quite a few changes to the original scene. Firstly, Y/n was a little harsher. Secondly, I stopped the scene where I did because the next part could be quite spoilery.
Hope you like it!
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A Little Update!
After I finished Nine Days of You, I mentioned that I already had another series completed. And I wasn't lying. I'd actually finished writing the entire story and had everything sorted out accordingly. All I had left to do was edit the videos and release them.
But... I wasn't satisfied with what I'd written.
Although the core concept was finalized, I felt like I'd rushed through the story without giving it enough time to breathe. It was originally supposed to be around 10 to 12 episodes, with each episode lasting approximately 20 to 25 minutes.
Honestly, it was my eagerness to release more stories that pushed me into rushing it. At one point, I nearly deleted the entire file. But I couldn't bring myself to do it. As I mentioned, I was far too attached to the core plot.
So, I decided to give it another try. I'm changing the setup, adding more characters, and taking the time to develop the story and include the details it needs.
The purpose of this post is to let you know that I'm currently working on it. I've only just started, and unlike before, I have much less time available for writing now. But I'm managing.
I have great expectations for this story myself. Not because I think it's going to be something huge or grand, but because, as a writer, I'm stepping a little outside my comfort zone with this one.
So, I've decided which series will be coming next, and I'm working extra hard on it so that, when it finally comes out, I hope you'll feel that it was worth the wait.
And in the meantime, I'll be releasing a oneshot or twoshot every week or two.
If you have any questions about this, please feel free to ask.
Thank you for your patience.
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When you read a story with many characters, like more than ten, where they all have equally important roles, how do you find it easy to follow them? I mean, how do you keep track of which character is speaking when the conversation switches between them? I was just wondering, since I've never written something with this many characters before.
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I know many of you might be disappointed by this, but that two-shot ends here. The reason I released Part Two was because I already had an idea of what I wanted to write next. However, I no longer feel like continuing the story.
Trust me, I'll come back soon with a better series to make up for this. I'm working really hard on it. And in the meantime, I'll keep releasing oneshots and twoshots.
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kiwi
Since so many of you wanted more of the last story, I've decided to release a second part soon. Please look forward to it!
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Can somebody give me some oneshot or twoshot ideas? Lately, everything I start writing somehow turns into a much longer story.
I hope you all enjoyed the new oneshot!
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