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Avni Holding the warm tiffin box Shweta had brought, she felt a sense of belonging that terrified and thrilled her at the same time.



Shweta watched the flicker of emotions on Avni’s face, a gentle, knowing smile playing on her lips.


Shweta :"Avni, beta, main jaanti hoon tum kya soch rahi ho. Professionalism, boundaries... Neil hamesha kehta hai ki tum apne kaam ko lekar kitni serious ho. Par dil ke mamlon mein koi boundary nahi hoti."


Avni looked down at the tiffin, her voice barely a whisper.


Avnii: "Aunty, main bas... mujhe samajh nahi aa raha. Neil itne bade ghar se hai, aur main... main sirf uski care kar rahi thi kyunki woh mera patient tha."


Shweta stepped closer and placed a comforting hand on Avni’s shoulder.


Shweta :"Uss kamre mein Neil patient tha, par tumhare liye woh sirf ek case nahi tha. Aur uske liye? Tum sirf ek nurse nahi thi. Rest well, Avni. Neil is waiting for a message to know you reached home safely."


With a wink and a warm pat, Shweta turned to leave, leaving Avni standing there with a racing heart and the smell of fresh parathas.



A Quiet Afternoon



Back at her small apartment, Avni couldn't sleep despite her exhaustion. She opened the tiffin—the parathas were still warm. As she ate, she found a small sticky note tucked under the lid.


> *"P.S. Neil didn't eat his breakfast until I promised to deliver yours. - Shweta aunty"


Avni laughed softly, a stray tear hitting the table. She picked up her phone and, for the first time, didn't hesitate to type.


Avni :" Reached home. Thank you for the breakfast, Neil. Tell Aunty it was delicious. And please... stop troubling her about my food!"


Within seconds, her phone buzzed.


Nei l:"I didn't trouble her! I just... made a suggestion. 😉 Also, you didn't say anything about the photo. Should I take it as a 'no' for my photography skills?"


Avni :"The photo was beautiful, Neil. Thank you."*


Neil :Good. Because I'm planning to take many more. Get some sleep, Avni. You have a long day tomorrow."



Two days later, Neil was finally allowed to move around more freely. His ribs still twinged, but his spirit was restless. He decided he couldn't wait for his follow-up appointment to see Avni again.


He drove to the hospital, not as a patient, but as a visitor. He carried a small bouquet of lilies—Avni’s favorite, as he’d overheard her telling Meena once.


He found her in the garden area of the hospital, sitting on a bench, looking exhausted. She had her eyes closed, leaning her head back against the cold metal of the bench.


Neil approached quietly and sat down beside her. Without opening her eyes, Avni spoke.


Avni : "Meena, 5 minute aur... phir main round pe chalti hoon."


Neil :"I'm not Meena, but I can give you 10 minutes."

Avni’s eyes snapped open. She turned to see Neil sitting there, looking handsome in a casual shirt, holding the flowers.


Avni : "Neil? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Tumhe rest karna chahiye!"



Neil : "Wahi purani scolding. Kuch naya try karo, Avni."


He handed her the flowers. Avni took them, her fingers brushing against his. The electricity was undeniable.


Neil : "I realized something at home. The walls are very quiet, but my head is very loud. It keeps playing back everything you said to me while I was in that bed.''...("ghar jake mujhe samjh aayi. ki divare toh ek dam shaant haai, Par mera dimag shor macha rha hai, bistar par lete huye tumne mujse jo kuch bhi kha tha, voh sab mere dimag mein baar-2 chal rha tha.)


Avni looked at the lilies, her voice trembling.


Avni : "Neil, please... don't say anything that changes things. Everything is so simple right now."...("Neil, please.. Kuch aisa mat kaho jisse halat badl jaye. Abhi toh sab kuch bahut aasan hai''.

Neil :"Is it? Because for me, it's very complicated. I don't see a 'Special Nurse Friend' anymore, Avni. I just see... you. The person who stayed awake when I couldn't sleep. The person who fought with me just to make me better.".. ("Kya sach mein? Kyuki mere liye toh yeh complicated hai. Avni, abh mujhe koi khas nurse friend nazar nhi ati. Mujhe bas... Tum nazar aati ho. Voh insaan jo raat bhar jagti thi jab mujhe neend nhi aaya karti thi. Voh insaan jisne mujhe theek karne ke liye mujhse hi lda karti thi")

Neil: "muje nhi lagta koi insaan kisi dusre insaan ke liye karta hai. tab, jab woh sirf apni duty kar rha ho tab jab woh kisi ko janta na ho aur na koi rishta ho. "bhle hi hum baad mein freinds ban gye par humari friendships se pehle hi tumne mere liye bahut kuch kiya hai." tumari aankhon mein mujhe sirf dosti ya insaaniyat ki fikar hi nhi nazar aati bhlki usse kyi jyada nazar aata hai.." I know tum sabke liye bahut caring ho tumari kindness alag level ki hai' jo aaj ke zamane mein bahut kam nazar aati hai. "Par mere liye tumari aankho mein unsab se bhi badhkar hai. aur meri liye bhi tum sirf special freind nhi ho, usse bhi kyi jyada mayne rakhti ho, aur main apni feelings ko sirf dosti ka naam nhi de sakta.. "aage tumari marzi koi force nhi hai. Main bas apne man ki baat tumhe bta ke apna man halka karna chahta tha.


Avni looked into his eyes, seeing the raw honesty there. Before she could respond, her pager went off. The moment shattered.


Avni : "Neil, I have to go. Emergency in Ward 4."


She stood up quickly, but Neil caught her hand for a split second.


Neil :"I'm not going anywhere, Avni. Take your time. I'll be waiting at the cafe across the street when your shift ends. No excuses today."

As Avni ran toward the building, she didn't look back, but the smile on her face was brighter than the morning sun.


The shift felt like an eternity. Every time Avni passed the empty Room 102, she felt a pang of longing. Finally, the clock struck 8 PM. Meena caught her as she was signing out.

Meena :"He's been sitting in that cafe for two hours, Avni. Go. Don't let your fear win over your heart."

Avni nodded, changed out of her scrubs, and smoothed her hair. She walked across the street, her heart drumming against her ribs.

She stepped into the cafe and saw him. He was staring at the door, and the moment he saw her, he stood up. There were no jokes this time, no teasing.



Neil :"You came."



Avni :"I told you... I always fulfill my duty. And right now, my duty is to tell you what's in my heart."



Neil held his breath as Avni stepped closer.

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Chapter 10

When Neil came out after taking a shower, he felt refreshed, though he still had a mild ache in his ribs and leg. He was frowning slightly because he knew his mother would not drop the topic he had evaded by going to the bathroom.

He came to the dining table where Shweta had already served sweet porridge and fruits.

Shweta: aao tillu, betho.Finish your breakfast quickly, and yes... I have set a reminder on your phone for 10 PM. Now there will be no excuses.

Neil managed a slight smile.

Neil: Thank you, Mom. Aap kis baare mein baat kar rhi thi?.

Shweta (Interrupting him, smiling):haan? Main kya keh rhi rhi?..haa kabh tum meri future daughter-in-law and your friend, Avni se apne dil ka izhaar karoge?

Neil took a deep breath and took a spoonful of porridge.

Neil: Mom, main jhooth toh nhi bolunga. Avni meri bahut achi friend hai, aur haan, I care about her a lot. Like..a good friend does. She helped me a lot in the hospital, and I will always support her like this.

Shweta: Beta, support krne toh bahut logp aa jate hai. But jiss tarh ka concern tum dikhate ho that is not just friendship..chalo chodo main tumse abh aur argue nhi karna chahti, par itna jan lo humein bhi koi jaldi nhi hai. It’s your decision. Just treat your mother like your friend and tell her everything.

Neil nodded and smiled. He thought it wouldn't be right to admit this to his mother until he fully understood his own feelings.

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Avni’s Busy Hospital Day

Meanwhile, at the hospital, Avni was constantly busy with work. After finishing her morning duty, she immediately had to prepare for the night shift as a junior nurse was on leave. She was sitting in the staff room during her lunch break, sipping her tea, when her best friend and fellow nurse, meena, came up to her.

Meena : Avni, I heard your patient, Neil, was discharged yesterday. You must be very happy. He used to tease you so much.

Avni brought a soft smile to her lips.

Avni : Yes, he went home yesterday. And you are right... he used to tease a lot, but...

Meena : But what?

Avni: But it feels strange without him now. He was so mischievous that the whole ward felt lively. Abh kuch shaant sa lag rha hai yeh subaha woh room jis mein woh rehta tha. aur mujhe aise bhi lgta hai jaise neil mujhe bula rha ho.

Meena (Laughing): Oh! You've gotten used to him! Maybe you're missing him.

Avni put the teacup down on the table and looked at meena.

Avni: Missing? No... No, nothing like that. woh toh bas... neil ki care routine ban gya tha. tumhe pta hai, neil ghar jake apni medicine lena bhul gya tha. aunty ne btaya mujhe.

meena : Really? He will never change! par Avni, main kuch kehna chahti hu. Jis tarike se tum neil ka khyal rakhti ho...woh sirf ek nurse ki nazron se nhi usse bad ke kuch hai. Jis tarah se tum uski har ek choti si choti baat ka dhyan rakhti ho. aur neil tumhe dekh ke bahut khush ho jata. It's not only friendship either side.

Avni blushed a little.

Avni : meena , we are just good friends. He said I was his Special Nurse Friend. He is a very nice person.

Meena smiled and held Avni’s hand.
Meena : Yes, yes, just friends. Come on, now go check on your next patient, or you'll start hearing his voice again.

Avni laughed and walked out of the room with meena.

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📞 Late Evening Ring

Late in the evening, when Avni was sitting at her duty station checking some files, her phone rang. She saw Neil's name flashing.

She hesitated a little, then picked up the call.

Avni: Hello, Neil? Is everything okay? Tumne mujhe call kyu kiya? Tumhe toh rest karna chahiye iss wakt.

Neil's voice on the other side was a little soft, but full of happiness.

Neil : Avni, I just called to say thank you. And yes, I didn't forget to take my medicine on time today. Who would forget after getting scolded by you and Mom?

Avni : Good! That's very good news. But you should rest. Don't stay up too late.

Neil: Yes, I'll only talk for five minutes. You know, everything feels so empty at home. There's no one to joke with, no one to argue with, and yes... no one to scold me into taking my medicines.

Avni (Laughing) : Oh really! It seems you've gotten used to me and my scolding.

Neil : Yes, maybe... And Avni... are you busy? If you're not busy, can I send you a favorite picture of mine that I clicked at the hospital?

Avni found it a little strange, but she couldn't refuse.

Avni: Yes, okay. Send it. But not more than five minutes.

Two minutes after the call ended, a notification popped up on Avni's phone. As soon as she opened the picture... she paused for a moment.

It was a picture of her—a picture where she was sitting on the sofa, drinking tea, her eyes full of laughter, trying to shake off her exhaustion. There was a text message with the photo.

Neil:"My favorite click. Best Nurse, Best Friend. Thank you for everything. ❤️"

Avni's heart raced. She only sent a '😊' emoji in reply to Neil, but she knew that something more than just friendship was blooming in her heart. That night was going to be a little long and very sweet.

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The soft glow of the hospital monitor was the only light near the nurse’s station as Avni stared at her phone. The emoji she sent felt inadequate compared to the warmth spreading through her chest. She zoomed in on the photo. She hadn’t even realized Neil had taken it; she looked tired, yet there was a genuine spark of happiness in her eyes that he had managed to capture.

"Best Nurse, Best Friend," she whispered to herself. The heart emoji at the end of his message seemed to pulse on the screen.... Around 2 AM, during a quiet , Meena found her sitting in the breakroom, staring blankly at a chart.


Meena: "Still thinking about the 'Special Nurse Friend'?"


Avni : ' main toh bas patients ki notes check kar rhi thi''.


Meena sat down, crossing her arms with a knowing smirk .

Meena: avni tumhara chehre ek open book ki tarah hai. Pichle teen ghante se phone ko dekh ke smile kar rhi ho. Call ki Neil ne?


Avni hesitated, then slowly turned the screen toward her friend. When Meena saw the photo and the caption, she let out a low whistle.


Meena: "Avni... guys don't take candid photos of 'just friends' looking tired and call it their favorite click. This is serious. How do you feel?

Avni sighed, her defenses finally dropping.


Avni: pta nhi meena kyu. Mera dil bahut tez se dhadkta hai jab mera phone vibrate karta. Jab Neil ward mein tha toh mujhe uske teasing ka hi intzaar rehta tha. Abh yeh ward khali sa lgta... Par woh ek patient hai aur main nurse kya yeh sahi bhi hai ya nhi?


Meena: avni woh patient tha. Abh woh sirf Neil hai.. Dont overthink, tumhare dil ne already decision le liya hai.


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At the Khanna mansion, Neil was also wide awake. He was propped up on his pillows, scrolling through the gallery on his phone. He had dozens of photos of his travels and friends, but the one of Avni was different.

He thought back to his conversation with his mother. “Jiss tarh ka concern tum dikhate ho that is not just friendship.


Neil : mom ko bhi samjh aa rha hai yeh sirf friendship nhi hai meri taraf se. Par kya avni ko yeh feel hota hoga? Jiss tarh se hum dono ka ek dusre ke liye care aur concern dikhana. Khash main avni ke man ki baat jan pata aur fir be zizak apne dil ka ezhar kar deta.




The Next Morning: An Unexpected Guest



Just as Avni’s shift was ending the next morning, she saw a familiar car pull up to the hospital entrance. It wasn't Neil—he was supposed to be resting—but Shweta stepped out, carrying a tiffin box.

Shweta walked straight to the nursing station, her eyes lighting up when she saw Avni.

Shweta: "Avni beta! I'm so glad I caught you before you left."

Avni: "Aunty? Is everything okay? Is Neil alright?"

Shweta (Laughing): "He is perfectly fine, though he’s been acting like a lovesick teenager all morning. I actually came for you. You worked the night shift, and I knew you’d be exhausted. I made your favorite parathas."

As Avni took the warm tiffin, she felt a lump in her throat. The care this family was showing her was blurring the lines between professional duty and personal belonging.

Shweta: "By the way... Neil told me he sent you something last night. Did you like it?"

Avni felt the heat rush to her cheeks. She realized then that Neil hadn't kept the photo a secret from his mother. The "investigation" into their feelings was now a family affair.


Avni(shyly) : ji-Jii aunty, bahut achi pic thi.







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Chapter:9

Neil lay in bed, his eyes closed and gentle smile on his lips. He recalled the moments he shared with avni in hospital. He remember the way avni come into his room, her smile bright and cheerful and the way she take care of him with such kindness and compassion. He thought back, neil chuckled to himself. He realized he had clicked several pictures of avni. Whenever he gets the chance he secretly clicked her picture in his camera.neil took his camera out from under the pillow, open it and started looking at the avni's pictures.first pic were avni adjusting his IV drip, her eyebrows furrowed in concentration. Second pic. Avni laughing with one of nurses,her eyes sparkling with joy. Neil heart skipped a beat as he gazed at the pictures. His feelings for avni growing stronger with each passing moment.

Neil : jab main avni ko propose krunga toh tab in sab pictures ka college banva ke tumhe gift karunga.

Like this neil scroll many pics one by one and adore them. And he was lost in the memories.... Shweta entered the room.


Shweta : tillu.

Neil's eyes widened and he quickly hid the camera under his pillow.


Neil(nervously) : j-jii, mom.


Shweta:tillu itna, ghabra kyu rha hai. Aur takiye ke niche kya chuppa rha hai?


Neil😅: abh voh kuch nhi mom. Main bas camera check kar rha tha theek hai ki nhi. Apko toh pta hai jab mera accident hua tha toh tab camera mere hath mein hi tha luckily camera koi damage nhi hua. Par fir bhi maine socha ek baar on krke dekh leta hu... Aap btaiye apko koi kaam tha.

Shweta: nhi. Bas yeh yaad dilaane ayi thi das baj gye hai. Abh medicine kha le.

Neil: mom,Main baad mein kha lunga. Abhi mere muh ka taste bahut kharab hua pda hai. Sara kadwa hua hai. Kuch meetha kha lun fir baad mein khaunga.

Shweta: theek hai beta. Fir main tere liye meethe chawal gud wale bna deti hoon .jo tujhe bahut pasand hai.par usse khane ke baad yaad se dawai kha lena.

Neil: aap chinta mat karo mom main chawal khane ke thodi der baad hi dwai kha lunga.


After some time.


Neil forgot taking his pain killers and the important medicine which very important to taking at 10 pm.


In side Neil's room


"Neil talking to himself.

Neil 🤔: main shyd kuch bhool rha hun.par kya yaad kyu nhi aa rha😵.. Chodo abh aur nhi socha ja rha waise bhi 12 baj gye hai. Badii neend 🥱aa rhi hai so jata hun. Subah yaad kar lunga kya bhool rha tha.

Neil lay down on bed and soon fell asleep💤😴.


In morning time.


Neil (with so much pain) :ahh, yeh ribs mein aur right leg mein firse pain kyun hone lga..


"Neil without opening eyes.calling out avni's name.


Neil (closed eyes) :avni, avniii yaar meri medicine dena bahut pain ho rha mere ribs aur leg mein.


Other side avni was asleep on a bench in hospital. Tired from a long day and night time duty. She was wroapped in blanket, her head titled to one side. Suddenly she heard a voice.. "Avni.. Avni...
She is mumbled, still half-asleep.

Avni: "haan, han.neil abhi ati hoon.


Avni came inside patient room.


Avni:haan, neil kya baat hai?


As avni looked around, and realize it. It's wasn't neil.


Patient : nurse, meri IV drip nikal dijiye.


Avni: han, abhi nikalti hoon.. Aap ne kya bol ke awaz lgai thi?.. I mean apne mera naam bola tha ya aise hi nurse, ma'am aise kuch bola.


Patient: maine toh apko nurse bola. Mujhe toh apka naam hi nhi pta hai.


Avni: a-achaa.. Theek hai...


(Avni in mind) : par mujhe aise Kyu lga jaise neil ne mujhe bulaya ho?.. Jyada mat soch avni tujhe isliye aise lag rha kyuki toh over time duty krke thak gyi hai. Neil ki awaz bhla kaha se mujhe sunai dene lgi.


In khanna house.inside Neil's room.


Neil: a-avni, avni...

Neil didn't gets any response. Again he call avni but this time little bit loudly. Bcz his voice shweta came to his room.


Neil:Avni kahan ho yaar please jaldi se meri medicines de do.mere se utha nhi ja rha.😣😖

Shweta (Worriedly) : tillu, kya hua beta Tu aise chila kyu rha. Aur avni woh kahan se ayi woh toh hospital mein hai. Aur tu apne ghar.

Neil immediately opened his eyes and looked around see his room's walls and realize it he's not in hospital.he's at home.

Shweta: kya hua tillu? aise kyu kamre ko dekh rha! Bhool gaya tha kya abh toh discharged ho gya hai.

Neil: mom, mere box mein se meri medicines nikal ke dena. Mujhe achanak se ribs, leg mein bahut pain ho rha hai.

Shweta: kyaa.. aise kaise ho skta hai. Tillu tumne kal raat ko dawai khai nhi thi kya?

Neil realize it. yesterday night time he forget about taking a medicines. Now he's afraid he must have to be listen a good scolding from his mother.

Neil: voh, vohh!! M-mom main bhul gya tha.

Shweta:kyaa!!.. Neil maine kitni baar tumhe bola yaad se apni medicines le lena fir bhi tumne nhi li.. Neil Tu apni health ko leke itna careless kaise ho skta hai. Jab maine tumhe bola main tumko medicines de dungi tab tumne bol diya."mom abh main bda ho gya hoon"..khud dawai le lunga abh mujhe inn medicines se dar nhi lagta na hi main inko phenkta hun."chahe avni se pooch lo maine ache se medicines li hai. Aur abh jab tumko khani nhi thi bhane lga rhe the aur jhooth bol rhe ho bhool gya tha..mujhe pta tha tu abhi bacchon ki tarah dawai khane se bhagta hai. Aur phenk deta hai.

Neil: mom, main sach bol rha hu. Mujhe sach mein bhool gya tha. Aur rhi baat dawai phekne ki toh main dusri dawaiyan phekta hu yeh wali dawaiyon ko nhi phenka na hi kabhi avni ne phekne diya.aur mujhe avni ne bola hai agar dawai nhi khaunga toh taklif mujhe hi sehni pdegi.

Shweta: wahh, mera beta samjhdar ho gya hai. Jo humari kabhi baat samjhta aur sunta nhi tha. Woh apni special nurse frnd ki baat ko ache se samjhne lga hai.. Not bad.

Neil:bas kariye.mata shree. Apka beta itni taklif se guzar rha hai. Aur aap ho ki baatein sunane mein lge ho.😕

Shweta:oh, sorry, sorry beta .abhi medicines lati hun.

Shweta take out Neil's medicines box and take out medicines and gave to Neil.. Neil's phone bell rings. Neil see it's avni call. Shweta also notice that. Before Neil picked up the calll, shweta already did it. And put the call on hands free.

Avni: hello, Neil kaise ho?

Neil: hii, avni. Main theek hun tum btao?

Avni: main, bhi theek.Acha yeh btao abh koi pain vgera toh nhi ho rha Aur tumne time se dawai kha li kal raat ko.?

Neil: Han..haan!!. Avni maine dawai kha li thi abh koi pain bhi nhi hai.

Shweta: jhooth..Avni beta yeh tillu na bilkul jhooth bol rha hai.

Avni listen shweta voice and greeted her.

Avni : namaste aunty.

Shweta : namaste beta.

Avni:aunty aap kya bol rhi thi. Neil ne kis baat par jhooth bola. Pain ke baare ya dawai na khane ke baare.?

Shweta: isne tillu ne na.kal raat ko dawai nhi khai aur abh subah uthte hi dard se chila rha tha aur tumko bula rha tha. avni ,avni.. Please meri dawai de do. Isse toh aise lag raha hai .Jaise tum iski personal nurse ho. Aur ghar hi Jo iska 24/7 dhyan rakh rhi ho.


Neil😳: mom.

Avni : neil tum kab sudhroge? Itne bade ho gye ho par adtein bacchon jaisi... Aunty apko pta hai Neil yahan bhi dawai ke naam se bahut chidta rehta tha aur bhane lgata tha.kabhi bolta tha 5 minute baad kha lunga aur kabhi 10 minute baad. Par main bhi samne khadi hokar bahut muskil se isko dawai khilaya karti thi. Aap ko Neil par nazar rakhni hogi kabhi kabhi toh yeh dawai phenk bhi deta tha. Aur sir(doctor) khud bhi daant khata tha aur mujhe bhi daant pdh jati thi. Iske chakkar mein.


Shweta:haw, yeh tillu toh bahut bda jhootha hai. Mujhe bol rha tha main toh bahut ache se dawai kha leta tha. Chahe avni se pooch lo. Abh bta tillu Tu toh abhi bhi chote bacchon wali harkate karta hai. Mujhe lga shyd hospital mein reh kar sudar gya hoga.

Neil: mom, avni main sach bol rha hoon mujhe sach mein yaad nhi aya. Maine yaad krne ki bahut koshish ki par dimag mein nhi aa rha tha. Maine kuch bhi intentionally nhi kiya. "I am sorry. i..i didn't mean to.."

Shweta: koi baat nhi. aage se yaad rakhna.

Avni: aunty, aap Neil ke phone par time reminder lga do. Isse Neil ko bhool nhi payega.

Shweta: haan, beta yeh sahi hai. Mujhe bhi kabhi kabhi yaad nhi rehta toh main Neil ko kaise yaad dilaungi reminder lga hoga toh Neil khud yaad se kha lega.

Avni: okay, byee Neil, aunty main zara patients ko check kar lu.

Shweta,neil: bye.


Neil : kya mom apne mujhe avni se baat bhi nhi karne di khud hi baatein kare ja rhe the aap toh.


Shweta: acha, tumne usse baat krke kya karna hai. Vaise bhi tu kabhi bhi baat kar skta hai. Main toh sirf aaj hi baat ki toh itna chid rha hai. Jaise woh teri property ho jo sirf tera hi haq hai usse baatein karne ka baki kisi ka toh hai nhi. Kuch jyada hi nhi tu avni mein interest hai.?


Neil: nhi, mom aisa kuch nhi hai.usse bahut kam time mil rha aaj kal woh busy rehti hai pura din fir abh bhi usko koi time nhi milega as freind main puchna chahta tha ussne kal dinner kiya ki nhi kyuki woh itni busy aur khud ko leke careless rehti hai khana peena hi bhool jati hai.


Shweta: yeh toh achi baat hai tujhe avni ki fikr hai. Par Neil ek baat puchna chahungi avni tere liye sirf friend hai ya uss se kuch badke hai tum dono ke beech. Dekh jaise woh teri care karti hai aur tu uski mujhe lgta hai .Tum dono ke dil mein kuch toh hai ek dusre ke liye.


Neil😳:mom, aisa kuch nhi hai. Hum sirf friends hai. That's it iske ilawa kuch nhi.


Shweta: teri maa ne duniya dekhi hai. Aise hi safed bal nhi aa gye mujhe mana ki main dye karwaye hain😆 par iska mtlb yeh toh nhi mujhe duniya daari ka pta nhi... Aur hamein bhi koi problem nhi hai. Hum toh bahut khush hai agar avni hamare ghar ki bahu bankar aayegi toh hamare toh bhagya khul jayenge aisi bahu paa kar. Avni jaisi ladki milna aaj kal ke samay mein bahut muskil hai.


Neil :aap kaisi baat lekar beth gyi. Aisa kuch nhi hai. Main sach bol rha hu agr kuch aisa hota toh main sbse phle apko batata... aur abh mujhe bhook lag rhi aap jake breakfast lgao main shower leke ata hu.


"Neil went to bathroom.


Shweta:Arre, tillu sun toh shi..Baat ko paltana toh koi iss ladke se sikhe.

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Chapter:8



Shweta and bebe were waiting at the door for neil's arrival.



Shweta(worriedly) : "bebe yeh tillu aur prakash ji abhi tak aaye kyun nhi, itna time kyu lag rha 1 ghante se jyada ho gya hai parkash ji ko neil ko lene gye..abh tak toh aa jana chahiye tha.


Bebe: "shweta hosla rakh,Kahi traffic mein fash gye honge.


"Meanwhile prakash and neil reached out khanna house.


Bebe(happily) : "yeh dekh aa gya hamara tillu.


Shweta face filled with relief and joy, shweta,Bebe rushed to neil's side. Neil's eyes lit up as he saw them, And smiled weakly, still felling bit tired but happy to be home .shweta embracing him tightly.


Shweta : (her voice trembling with emotion) "mera beta, mera tillu. You're finally home.


Bebe: "shweta bas kar mujhe bhi toh mil lene de, kabh se kadi hoon tu paase (side) hone ka naam hi nhi le rhi.


Shweta: sorry Bebe, mil lijiye aap bhi. Woh kya hai na tillu ko itne din baad dekha toh mera man hi nhi kar raha apne bete ko gle se hatane ka.


Bebe too hugged neil, tears coming down her face.


Bebe: hum bahut pareshan the tere liye beta. Shukar hai tum theek ho. Fir se humara ghar. Ghar jaise lgega. Tere bina na bahut khali sa lag rha tha.


Neil smiled.after many days again felling his bebe mother's comfort and love over him.


Neil : Bebe, mom. "dont worry I'm okay now. "


Prakash: bas karo bhai, "Aap dono toh yahi par hi apna emotional pittara khol ke beth gye. Bachche ko andar toh jaa lene do yahan khade khade thak gya hoga. Abhi bhi neil ko aram karne ki sakht jarurat hai.


Shweta : sorry, "khanna saab, chal tillu andar chalte hai.


They started to walking towards to house inside. Shweta held neil's arm examining carefully.


Shweta: "kitna patla ho gya hai mera baccha. Koi ni abh tu ghar aa gya hai na dekhna kaise tujhe khila khila ke pehle jaise karte.


Bebe (chuckled) han bilkul shi bola. Abh hum ache se neil ke khane pine ka dhyan rakege aur kahi bahar nhi jane dege. Ghar par ache se reh ke rest karna hoga. Samjh gya tillu?


Neil 😊: okay, boss. Apka hukam sar aankhon par.


As they entered the house, the aroma of home-cooked food carried through the air, making neil's stomach growl with hunger.


Neil : mom, kya bnaya hai? Khushboo toh bahut achi aa rhi hai.


Shweta: aaj maine teri sari favorite dishes bnayi hai.


Neil : Arre wahh😍 aaj toh itne dino baad ghar ka khana khane ko milega. Woh bhi sab kuch meri pasand ka... Mom main abhi fresh hoke aya fir ake khana khayenge.


Shweta: theek hai beta.




After some time:



Everyone sitting around dinning table, except anita bcz she's has gone to kitty party.


Neil: Bebe chachi nhi dikh rhi kahi bhi?


Bebe (lied ) : puttar woh mandir gyi hai.usne tere theek hone ke liye mannat mangi thi bas wahi chadane gyi hai.

Shweta😧: Bebe aap jhu..

Bebe: shwetaa!!.. Chup chaap khana paros thanda ho rha hai.


Shweta served everyone food. And seated down with them. She is happily asked Neil, prakash Bebe.how is food taste.?Both father and son said it's delicious. "But Bebe is Bebe .she is never misses an opportunity to pull shweta's leg.


Bebe: (teasingly)bechare jhoothi tarif kar rhe hai😆..Shweta ke haathon ka khana kha ke toh Neil aur bhi bimar ho jayega.


Neil, prakash. Expression 😲🤭


Shweta:what's, Bebe aap ke kehne ka kya matlab hai?main khana bura bnati hoon? Toh itne salon se mere hath ka hi khana kha rhe tab Kyu nhi bura lga. aaj achank se bura lgne lga. Huhh. 🙄😒


Bebe: abh kya kare humari mazaboori thi. Pta nhi kabh humare tillu ki shadi hogi aur kabh mujhe uski voti (wife)ke hath ka accha khana khane ko milega.


Shweta:apko bada pta hai. Woh acha khana banayegi agar mere se bhi bura bnati hoi toh.?


Bebe: matlab tumne maan liya ki tu khana acha nhi bnati.


Shweta: bebee!!. Abh main kabhi bhi khana nhi bnaugi. Bheema hi banaya karegi.


Bebe: han toh acha hi hai. Kam se kam khana toh acha milega na.

Shweta: bebee😫


Bebe( dramatically) : shwetaa!! .. Abh aisa bootha (face) na bna mazak kar rhi thi . Acha khana banaya hai aaj tumne.😏


Shweta: sirf aaj? 😒


Bebe: haan sirf aaj..abh tu chahti hai na tere khane ki burai na karun toh chup chaap beth ja.


Prakash: Bebe aap bhi na kyu meri biwi ka mood kharab kar rhe ho.


Bebe: Tu chup kar bada aya biwi ka chamcha. Usse pta hai main mazak kar rhi hoon. Aur woh bhi natak kar rhi gussa hone ka.hum dono ka roz ka kaam hai nhi toh roti nhi hazm hoti hai. Haina shweta?


Shweta: hanji Bebe bilkul shi bola apne. 😁


Bebe: dekha sunny teri biwi ne khud hi maan liya na usse bina nakhre kare roti hazm nhi hoti.


Shweta😮: haww, bebe mujhe khud ki hi baat ke niche le ayi. Aapne aap ka toh naam hi nhi liya.


Bebe: isliye toh tujhe bolti hu tu meri mote dimag wali bahu hai. Jise kisi ki baat ke neeche lana bahut aasan hai.


Prakash 😂: Bebe tusi bhi na...bilkul sahi baat ki.


Prakash, bebe laughed, shweta glared at prakash..neil felling happy to be surrounded by his loved ones.and happy see the bebe, shweta's daily basis teasing session.



After lunch Neil settled on his favorite spot on the couch, felling relaxed. Shweta and Bebe sat beside him. For some time they are talking about random things and crack the jokes. Neil phone beeped and see the notification it's avni message. "Mister Neil don't you think now it's time too need a rest? I know after so many days now finally your at home with your family and must talking, laughing with them.without taking a rest. but please now take a rest. You are fine but still a bit weak. You needed proper rest and medication on time. Got it?


Neil smile😊 seeing avni message nd care toward him.


Neil reply: okay, madam jii samajh gaya.🙂


Shweta,Bebe : tillu phone mein aisa kya dekh liya ya pdh liya jo itna smile kar rhe ho?


Neil: kuch nhi.mom,bebe .. Bas avni ka msg tha. Woh mujhe rest karne aur time se dawai lene ko bol rhi thi.


Shweta: ohh. Tabhi toh main sochun aakhir kar kiska msg dekh ke mera tillu itna muskra rha hai.Jarur koi khas baat hogi.


Bebe: shweta. Khas baat nhi. Khas ladki bolo. Itni khas ki Neil ke paas uska no. Bhi hai. Jabki koi bhi nurse aur patient ek dusre ko apna no. Thodi na dete hai.


Neil: Bebe avni sirf ek nurse nhi hai. meri bahut achi friend bhi ban gyi hai. Hum dono ki bahut achi dosti ho gyi hai ek dusre se.


Bebe: ohh,accha.


Neil: mom, bebe aap log batein karo main chlta hun aram karne.


Shweta: chl tillu main tujhe room tak chod ati hun.



Neil : nhi, mom aap yaha betho main khud chla jaunga. Abh main bilkul theek hun.

Shweta: theek hai.




"Neil went to his room. He settled to his bed, feeling little bit tired. He reached for him phone and dialed avni's number.she answered on the first ring, a warm smile on her face.

Avni : 'hello, Neil everything ok? "

Neil( smiled ) : "hey avni, yeah I'm fine. m-main bas isliye phone lgaya tha.. Hann for my next meditation? "


Avni sadly in mind: sirf isliye call kiya jab ki maine meditation schedule chart bna ke diya tha. Mujhe lga Neil ne mere liye call kiya hoga lunch kiya ki nhi. Kyuki abh hum dono ko sath mein lunch khane ki adat thi.

Neil:hello, hello avni are you there?

Avni:ha..han Neil . Hold on a sec.... Neil abh tum 4pm medicine kha lena aur raat 10 baje ko. Bhulna mat ok.

Neil:okay avni, thank you and sorry for disturbances.

Avni 😊: anytime, and it's ok you're not disturbing me at all.. "Vaise Neil jo maine tumhe chart diya tha uspe bhi medication schedule likha tha.

Neil😣: "sorry main bhul gya tha... 'Abh avni tumne lunch kar liya?"

Avni smiled in wide : nhi.Abhi nhi kiya.

Neil: kyu? Abhi tak lunch kyu nhi kiya. Avni tum dusron ka khyal rakhne mein busy rehti ho. Aur khud ka bilkul bhi dhyan nhi rakhi ho.

Avni:arre arre.abh bas bhi karo dantne mein lge ho. Btaya toh tha aaj dusri nurse ki duties bhi main handle kar rhi hoon toh bas time hi nhi mila aur na abh man kar rha.

Neil: kyun man kyu nhi kar raha?

Avni in mind: kyuki abh tumhare beth ke lunch karne ki adat jo gyi hai .

Neil: avni, avni avniiii..kaha kho jati ho. Maine pucha kyu nhi man hai.
Avni: Bas aise hi.


Neil: yeh kya baat hoi. Khana nhi khaogi toh energy kaise ayegi fir apni duty kaise kar payogi. Jab main khana nhi khata tha toh bada danti thi order deti thi. Jabardasti khana khila diya karti thi... Abh main tumko order deta khana kha lo nhi toh main aunty ko bol dunga.

Avni😆: Neil tumhare paas konsa mummy ka no. Hai.

Neil:accha theek hai agar nhi khaogi toh main kabhi tumse baat nhi karunga hamari frndship ki kasam tumhe.

Avni: Arre, ajeeb jabardasti hai. Nhi man toh kaise khana kha lungi?

Neil: dekho avni akhri baar bol rha hun. Chlo abhi khana start kro. nhi toh katti forever.
Avni:accha baba,.. Abhi khane lgi hoon. Khush abh?

Neil: mujhe tum par jakeen nhi.. Main video call kar rha hoon uta lena.

Avni:yeh ldka bhi. Chlo theek hai.

Neil video call avni. Avni quickly answered and showing food filed plate to Neil.
Avni: yeh dekho Mr. Khanna. Main lunch kar rhi hun.


Neil: haan, abh sahi hai.


"After For some time avni neil talk to each other and also avni finished her lunch.now avni is very much happy...Avni hang up, she was back to her duties at hospital. Checking the patients on their needs.










Kaisa lga chapter itne dino baad read karke ya yeh bolo after one month 😁.. Cmnt mein jarur btana acha lga ya bura.










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